Island voices 3

2. Choose five links and write comments of 50-100 words about the content of the blogs.

Pearlyn - http://lit-44-2010-pearlyn.blogspot.com/

The stories she choosen are interesting and have all the points and answers the question very well. i think it will be more perfect if she trying using her own words to answer the questions. beside that, she could also quote more evidences to show the reader where she got her points and it will be easier for the reader to understand what she mean. overall, everything is fine but it would be better if she give examples of and show the difference in the generation's thinking.

Kerene - http://lit-44-2010-kerene.blogspot.com/

There are quite alot of reasons and evidences of why Madam Teo did not welcome the changes in the first place. She could also explain to us, why Madam Teo didn't welcome the change of moving house. beside that, she also has evidences of when Madam Teo started to accept the changes when she is talking to Ah-Pek. She also has example and reasons to show us the changes in her feelings before and after. i find that it would be better if she has given mroe points. overall, she did a very good job.

Juvena's - http://lit-44-2010-juvena.blogspot.com/

I think that it will be more better if juevena could try to add more points and evidences in her answer. She tried her very best to answer the questions and i find that she did a very good job. She could have put in more effort by including the thinking for her daughter, to show a clear difference in the thinking to the olden generation and younger generation.

Genevieve - http://lit-44-2010-genevieve.blogspot.com/

Points are elaborated very well. readers could understand what she is saying. She did a very great job by elaborating the importance of each story. Stories are well elaborated and very detailed. She also got the facts right and she wrote quite long. overall, she did a great job.

TszHo - http://lit-44-2010-wongtszho.blogspot.com/

He is not specific about who the old generation people are, and he has been using alot shortform which is very bad and not very nice for the readers. He could also include the younger generation people like, Beverly and TianYee in his answer, to show the differences in the thinkings between the generation. over all, tszho no short form please! u did kinda great job anyway =)